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Ally ([personal profile] likealeafonthewind) wrote2019-04-07 12:31 pm

Sunday Six - a snippet from the concubine!Shen Wei fic

I realized I haven't posted a snippet from this one for awhile, so here's a bit from the less-angsty fic.





Shen Wei takes a seat on a bench in one corner of the room. There’s no telling when the Crown Prince will come by, so he uses the time to focus on his breathing and steady his nerves. This is a little different than his usual missions but it’s well within his abilities to complete. Certainly he’s a better candidate for this than his brother, whose flair for the dramatic would get him into trouble from the outset. His insistence that everyone, including his own twin brother, call him only by his self-proclaimed title of Ye Zun for the duration of the war is evidence enough of that.

Some time later, a gentle knock against wood brings him out of his reverie. He can see three shadows through the screens on the doors to the guest pavilion that they’re waiting in. One of those is one of the Empress’ ladies, who announces softly, “Empress Shen, the Crown Prince Zhao Yunlan is here.”
galaxysoup: (Shen Wei Portrait)

[personal profile] galaxysoup 2019-04-07 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Omg the idea of Ye Zun trying to fill this role is both hilarious and awful. :D I am so curious to read this fic!!
phyrry: Silhouette of a flying dragon. (Default)

[personal profile] phyrry 2019-04-07 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, Yezun would probably burn the capital down and call it a day.
tinny: Something Else holding up its colorful drawing - "be different" (Default)

[personal profile] tinny 2019-04-07 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol dramatic!Ye Zun . I like Shen Wei's POV and the overall mood in this a lot!
rheasilvia: (SW and Kunlun)

[personal profile] rheasilvia 2019-04-07 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, interesting! I wonder how Shen Wei will do at court intrigue... ;-)
extrapenguin: Shen Wei from Guardian looking down demurely and smiling. (shenwei)

[personal profile] extrapenguin 2019-04-08 10:45 am (UTC)(link)
Ooohhh yes good I love it! Shen Wei is very pretty and good at social maneuvering, of course he's the one given to the handsome prince!

(Though a note on terminology: Shen Wei isn't married to the Emperor, so he's not the Empress. The Crown Prince's official wife would be Crown Princess Consort, but Shen Wei's just a concubine so it's Concubine Shen for now. Though perhaps in the future, he can get a promotion.)
extrapenguin: Ye Zun from Guardian kneeling in surprise on a floor. (ye zun)

[personal profile] extrapenguin 2019-04-08 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oops! It's so difficult at times, having Shen Xi and Shen Wei share surnames.
extrapenguin: A man raising a glass protector off from above a magic device. (guardian)

[personal profile] extrapenguin 2019-04-08 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Zhao Yunlan's mom is secretly from Dixing, too! :D
extrapenguin: Man wagging his finger at offscreen while looking at camera (zhao yunlan)

[personal profile] extrapenguin 2019-04-09 05:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I now want to see Zhao Xinci's reaction when Zhao Yunlan manifests a Dixing power... (Personality-wise, it'd likely be supreme insight, clairvoyance, telepathy, or mind control. But if we want to go way out the left field ... tentacles? Teleportation? Ability to turn every neatly laid out thing into a mess?)

ETA: I have an even more hilarious idea! We never hear Ye Zun's name, so it could maybe have been something similar to "Shen Xi", and after death, he transmigrates into a girl's body and ends up married to Zhao Xinci, raising Zhao Yunlan. While this idea has little merit other than its shock value, one of those merits is that it'd make Zhao Xinci very, very upset.
Edited 2019-04-09 17:30 (UTC)
extrapenguin: A man raising a glass protector off from above a magic device. (guardian)

[personal profile] extrapenguin 2019-04-10 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
He could use his tentacles for apprehending subjects, hugging his xiao-Wei, and kinky sex! What's not to love? *g*

Zhao Yunlan would definitely need a drink after discovering that actually, the evil villain was his mom and he's been fucking his uncle...