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likealeafonthewindI swear this is an actual fix-it. There's just some angst to get through first. :)
Anyway! I think it wasnaye who said that this doesn't have be exactly 6 sentences, so I decided to include more. The first snippet I posted for this is here.
“Yeah,” Zhao Yunlan agrees. Then, “Wait. Before you go—can I, just one more time—” He’s having trouble forming a complete sentence, putting his desperate desire into words, but Shen Wei understands what he’s asking.
Shen Wei steps up to him and cups a hand around the nape of his neck. Zhao Yunlan wraps his arms around his waist. Their lips meet softly. It’s a tender kiss, one that says ‘I’ll love you forever’ and ‘this isn’t the end for us.’ And then it says, ‘I’ll never forget you’ (which is a lie, because Shen Wei will forget him and they both know it). And then, finally, it says, ‘Goodbye.’
Anyway! I think it was
naye who said that this doesn't have be exactly 6 sentences, so I decided to include more. The first snippet I posted for this is here.“Yeah,” Zhao Yunlan agrees. Then, “Wait. Before you go—can I, just one more time—” He’s having trouble forming a complete sentence, putting his desperate desire into words, but Shen Wei understands what he’s asking.
Shen Wei steps up to him and cups a hand around the nape of his neck. Zhao Yunlan wraps his arms around his waist. Their lips meet softly. It’s a tender kiss, one that says ‘I’ll love you forever’ and ‘this isn’t the end for us.’ And then it says, ‘I’ll never forget you’ (which is a lie, because Shen Wei will forget him and they both know it). And then, finally, it says, ‘Goodbye.’
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